Life Giving as a Mother,
Caressing as a Grand-Mother..
Nurturing as Nature,
Though fluctuating as Temperature..
Naughty personified Sister,
Beauty personified Life-Partner..
Gentle as the Breeze,
Unpredictable as the Sneeze..
Strict as a Teacher,
Still calm as a Preacher..
Still calm as a Preacher..
Happy as a Baby,
You are sharp and Savvy..
Will fight many a Combat,
Make a home cozy and Compact..
Can bake a good Egg,
And break a strong Leg..
Be a man's Wife,
Add meaning to his Life..
Epitome of Courage,
You are no Mirage..
Oh beautiful Sthree,
There's no parallel to Thee..
This, a dedication by me.
Awesome Poem da :)
ReplyDeleteUr girl is very lucky :)
welcome to the world of poems :)
ha ha..thanks a lot :)
DeleteI'm wondering about the baking of the egg?
ReplyDeleteCan it be like this:
Can bake a good cake,
And cure a strong ache
For a first timer, it's a well thought out poem but there's immense scope for improvement.
Joy always,
Susan
Wow..this is more better :)
Deletethanks a lot :)
sure will improve :)
Awesome and simple poem!! :)
ReplyDeleteNice one Kaushik :) Simple and elegant
ReplyDeletethank yu :)
Deletevery nice Kaushik...:)
ReplyDeleteThank yu :) :)
DeleteGood one !
ReplyDeletethanks a lot :)
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